
with the blisters, seeking the touch.
wrapped across my bosom,
oh! is this what they call,
the lady in no man's land ?
About the land they praise,
they say, I invade it.
but the quest which taunt me tight...
am I or was I ?
He said, the look is deceptive,
as well as the heart of mine.
but the woman heart ain't know,
they say, what deceptive mean.
With all my heart, I loved him.
I was the sun and he, the shone.
And today, the sun is there...
shining though a bit gloomy
but alone.......
mr. boffin bard potrays the woes of a cute lady soooo well.....awesome!!
ReplyDeleteWell bro... U amaze me everytime. I dnt know how u give words to such pristine thoughts but 1 thing I can say that this is yet another masterpiece, tailor made for every lonely girl
ReplyDeleteWow... Lurved your words pal... Love you
ReplyDeleteIshika:hhhmmmm...good thoughts...nice words...and the most important excellent effort!!!KEEP IT UP!
ReplyDelete:):):D
i can't believe that one of my student can write such a poem..............i am amused.......but i would love to read something more cheerful rather than these gloomy...........poems........love you.......................
ReplyDeleteOh, my!! This is so beautiful lil bro!
ReplyDeleteYou know, I wasn't into poetry really, it looked a bit difficult to me (don't know why) but since I started reading yours I feel I really like it. I love how you can transform words into feelings.
In this one, for example, when I read it's like I'm swimming... weird.
LOVE YOU!
wow...each time i check your blog cant stop leaving a comment...
ReplyDeletewell...if i could have given rewards then i will give this as "best poem of the year 2010"
...excellent! :)
@shashi sir: sir,seriously speaking...you made my day... thanks, thanks a lot for your feedback sir... i will surely try to write another one which will match ur expectation.... love you sir
ReplyDelete@safi: thanx a lot dear...just swim as much you want... this blog is always open for you to swim anytime...but make sure cold and fever not catch you....and dont forget i love you more...
ReplyDelete@sujata:thanx a lot for the feedback.just loved it...but personally i feel 'the legend of an angel' is the best one till date.