Saturday, December 18, 2010

THE LONELY GIRL

My chilly winter hand,
with the blisters, seeking the touch.
wrapped across my bosom,
oh! is this what they call,
the lady in no man's land ?

About the land they praise,
they say, I invade it.
but the quest which taunt me tight...
am I or was I ?

He said, the look is deceptive,
as well as the heart of mine.
but the woman heart ain't know,
they say, what deceptive mean.

With all my heart, I loved him.
 I was the sun and he, the shone.
And today, the sun is there...
shining though a bit gloomy
but alone.......

9 comments:

  1. mr. boffin bard potrays the woes of a cute lady soooo well.....awesome!!

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  2. Well bro... U amaze me everytime. I dnt know how u give words to such pristine thoughts but 1 thing I can say that this is yet another masterpiece, tailor made for every lonely girl

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  3. Wow... Lurved your words pal... Love you

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  4. Ishika:hhhmmmm...good thoughts...nice words...and the most important excellent effort!!!KEEP IT UP!
    :):):D

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  5. i can't believe that one of my student can write such a poem..............i am amused.......but i would love to read something more cheerful rather than these gloomy...........poems........love you.......................

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  6. Oh, my!! This is so beautiful lil bro!
    You know, I wasn't into poetry really, it looked a bit difficult to me (don't know why) but since I started reading yours I feel I really like it. I love how you can transform words into feelings.
    In this one, for example, when I read it's like I'm swimming... weird.

    LOVE YOU!

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  7. wow...each time i check your blog cant stop leaving a comment...

    well...if i could have given rewards then i will give this as "best poem of the year 2010"
    ...excellent! :)

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  8. @shashi sir: sir,seriously speaking...you made my day... thanks, thanks a lot for your feedback sir... i will surely try to write another one which will match ur expectation.... love you sir

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  9. @safi: thanx a lot dear...just swim as much you want... this blog is always open for you to swim anytime...but make sure cold and fever not catch you....and dont forget i love you more...

    @sujata:thanx a lot for the feedback.just loved it...but personally i feel 'the legend of an angel' is the best one till date.

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