dusk is darkening to a darker hue,
roads are full with speeding shadows,
like same old evening and same busy roads.
yet, you can see it and feel anyhow,
that something is crazy something is new.
My palms felt moistened a bit,
tears of happiness, ready to blast.
the happy palm now screamed with joy,
Oh! my God...
I have got a company at last.
I saw the other palm,
and those fingers... closed, twisted,
between those spaces, that my fingers create.
filling those gaps,they are perfectly placed.
When my lips failed,
I turned my heart on.
But that bloody coward heart,
followed my lips and stayed aside,
passed the call to my sweaty palm,
Hey, dear... now it's your turn.
But when my heart and lips failed,
can't even show their novel hue.
what can my poor palms do?
to reveal, what he thinks of you.
The hands parted in reflex,
as the palms loosened the grip,
I woke up with a gasping heart,
Oh,damn !!! I was in my sleep.
chi......chiiiiiiiiiiii..........ete bhala lekhucha.............bekar..bekar.... bobbal heichi ma..........ehe..ehe.emti bi lekhipara....ohaaaa.......kain lekhucha????kichi bujha padiuni ma......kie ma.........kuha na............ete swapna dekhuchi................keo deha bhala nahin ki.......
ReplyDeleteWoohoo! so finally this poem is out to the world. I can now proudly claim that I was the eye witness of the making of this masterpiece :)
ReplyDeletehmm.... poetic version of the reality.... nice work dude....life is all about such moments... live it... love it...and let the coward heart beat faster..louder...cos normally stethoes are for doctors...hope you understand....
ReplyDeleteliked it....especially the following lines....:)....too lazy to login...therefore selecting the profile as anonymous...."ls"
ReplyDelete"Some are playing and partying a few,
dusk is darkening to a darker hue,
roads are full with speeding shadows,
between those spaces, that my fingers create.
filling those gaps,they are perfectly placed.
I woke up with a gasping heart,
Oh,damn !!! I was in my sleep."
Marvellously construed!!
ReplyDeleteThe title, the location all spice it up..
"Tears of happiness, ready to blast"( Luurrved this line)
Make sure you get 'it' at last! ;)
Ah, fabulous music... A magic beyond all we do here!
ReplyDeleteGr8 work boy. Lurvd ett.. :)
@mam:-i feel like dying with this smile on my face...just lurved your feedback.
ReplyDeleteread it once before....jus tooooo... beautiful.but worst thing is that i understud its significance today...after so long.
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